Seeing and Savoring with Your Writer’s Eyes

by Diane Owens on June 5, 2012

Today Venus will waltz slowly across the sun. Its slow dance is actually called a “transit of Venus.”

And it won’t happen again for another 105 years.

English: 2004.06.08 Venus Transit, Celestron 8...

English: 2004.06.08 Venus Transit, Celestron 8" Catadioptric Telescope (Photo credit: Wikipedia)

We won’t be able to see it firsthand without a special telescope. You could make one of those homemade pinhole observatories, but it won’t be quite the same as seeing it with your very own eyes. NASA’s website will broadcast the seven-hour celestial event online.

This morning before Venus began its solar crossing, I walked through my neighborhood, camera in hand. I thought about the rarity of today’s Venus transit.

Then I spotted the same organ pipe cactus that I had photographed and written about yesterday.  There were a few new blooms open today, but the bloom I saw yesterday now looked like a closed fist, its one day of blooming past.

This cactus flower won’t open again. Not tomorrow, not next summer, not even in another century. Not ever.

Organ Cactus Bloom Closed

The day after the blooming

There are so many things we miss because they seem too ordinary. Because we’re too busy to slow down and notice.

Even an extraordinary event like the lunar eclipse a few weeks ago. I was working on an editing deadline and almost missed seeing that rare event, even if it was just projected onto a piece of paper.

But I didn’t miss the cactus blooming yesterday in its showy “all summer in a day” splendor.  And I was outside again today, a witness to its closing, its transit to the next phase of life.

Thinking of the cactus flower’s “all summer in a day” lifespan, I looked up the details of Ray Bradbury’s short story.  The irony is that the 1954 science fiction story is about people living on Venus!

Bradbury imagines Venus to be a place where the sun shines for only two hours every seven years. One little girl, Margo, remembers the sun from when she lived in Ohio five years ago.  When she describes its warmth and brightness, her classmates don’t believe her. They were only two the last time they saw the sun. The only life they know is a constant rainstorm, “thousands upon thousands of days compounded and filled with one end to the other with rain.”

When Margo writes a poem about the sun, her classmates say she couldn’t have possibly written it. When the teacher leaves the room, the children lock her inside a closet.  You can read   “All Summer in a Day”  and find out what happens when the sun comes out.

Margo’s poem reminds me of the cactus blossom: “I think the sun is like a flower / that blooms for just an hour.”

What blooms in your life for an hour or a day?  And how long have you been locked inside your own closet, blinded by distractions and busyness? What have you been missing?

When the children go outside to play in the sunshine, Bradbury writes, “They looked at everything and savored everything.”

Isn’t that what writers do? We look at everything with fresh eyes, savoring what we see.

So go outside and savor something. Whether it’s Venus’ transit seen through a pinhole or a flower blooming spectacularly in your own backyard. Everything is out there, waiting to be seen and savored.

As the poet Robert Burns wrote, “Now’s the day and now’s the hour.”

 

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Lessons of the Morning

by Diane Owens on June 4, 2012

When the student is ready, the teacher appears.

I’ve learned that everyone and everything can be my teacher. But only if I’m a student who is paying attention and willing to learn. Every writer needs to be this kind of good student.

This morning my teachers were two friendly pool guys working in my neighborhood.

When they noticed me shooting pictures of cactus flowers in the pool owner’s yard, one of them teased, “Wanna take my picture?”

“No, I prefer this cactus,” I said.

Cactus Flower

Only one day to bloom

“Aren’t they beautiful? I’m surprised they don’t have any fragrance,” the younger pool guy said.

“You better take lots of pictures,” the older one warned. “The flowers open at dawn and by noon, they’re done.”

Then the two of them opened the back gate and disappeared.

Their get-it-while-you-can words of wisdom stuck with me during my walk. I opened my eyes like a just-opened cactus flower. Everywhere I looked, I saw my neighborhood with fresh eyes.

Everything was alive and waiting to be admired, beheld, appreciated.

I remembered the title of a short story by Ray Bradbury, “All Summer in a Day.”  I hadn’t thought of the story or its title since my days teaching eighth grade.

What if there were only one day of summer?

In Arizona so few summer days are cool enough for a morning nature walk. What if I began treating each day like it was my one and only opportunity to be outside, to feel the early morning breeze, to observe everything I see?

One day only.

I need to get it while I can. While the morning is here, spread out before me in all its beauty. In all its aliveness. In every bird chattering, bees buzzing and gnat swarming precious summer moment.

Eyes wide open, camera in on position, I made the most of this Arizona morning, noticing everything. Before the rising temperature  drove me indoors.  Before the cactus blooms closed.

Before one magical morning moment disappeared forever.

Thanks for this morning’s lesson, guys.

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